Thread:NMMacc18/@comment-27652186-20200501161203/@comment-30239770-20200504002215

I wouldn’t rewrite the version we have here, except maybe make changes so stuff makes a little more sense rather than just have things happening and then moving on to the next thing with no explanation at all.

By the way, I’ve read the first 2 chapters of your new Calvin and Hobbes fic, and I’m really enjoying it so far.

One suggestion I have for future chapters is maybe do a chapter centered on what the other characters are feeling besides Calvin and Hobbes, such as Calvin’s Parents stuck with the reality that Calvin will be in the house for the next few months (Even with the schedule, Calvin will drive them crazy somehow), and perhaps Miss Wormwood and Principal Spittle, who would probably be relishing in the fact that they don’t have to deal with Calvin for the rest of the school year.